Monday, February 13, 2012

Some samples for my new friends...?

Do you like these? Which one most?



1. Afternoon Storm



Rain drops, a voice

Blue Clouds, a song

Torrent, a chorus

And Thunder, the drums

Matinee Showcase

By the window, it’s warm

Play me another, Afternoon Storm



2. Little Green Vine



Hi, I’m, a little green vine

I want to find, a fence to climb

I want to grow, twelve feet long

Careful not to touch the lawn



Spring, Seeds, the start of me

I think I’ll go, climb that tree

On my tips, buds will grow

I’ll put on a flower show



Here she comes, water can

Sunshine Lady’s, garden plan

She likes me, her little green vine

I dance in the wind in the summertime



3. Warrior’s lament



I hear tomtom calling

Dark forest echoes

I feel drums beating through tall grass



On crest a signal fire

Warns great danger

Ride away to spirits pointing



I see a totem gesture

Signs pathways ending

I hear Grandfathers

From herds up in the sky
Some samples for my new friends...?
My favorite is definitely 'Afternoon Storm'...very, very good job.

I could hear it, obviously, but I could also feel it and touch it. A very good way to look at a rainy day...lol..
Reply:My fave...Afternoon Storm.. Why? I love storms and I like the picture you painted.
Reply:My favorite here is "Little Green Vine". I like its rhythm.
Reply:2 was cool.
Reply:the first one, they were all good though!

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