Do you like these? Which one most?
1. Afternoon Storm
Rain drops, a voice
Blue Clouds, a song
Torrent, a chorus
And Thunder, the drums
Matinee Showcase
By the window, it’s warm
Play me another, Afternoon Storm
2. Little Green Vine
Hi, I’m, a little green vine
I want to find, a fence to climb
I want to grow, twelve feet long
Careful not to touch the lawn
Spring, Seeds, the start of me
I think I’ll go, climb that tree
On my tips, buds will grow
I’ll put on a flower show
Here she comes, water can
Sunshine Lady’s, garden plan
She likes me, her little green vine
I dance in the wind in the summertime
3. Warrior’s lament
I hear tomtom calling
Dark forest echoes
I feel drums beating through tall grass
On crest a signal fire
Warns great danger
Ride away to spirits pointing
I see a totem gesture
Signs pathways ending
I hear Grandfathers
From herds up in the sky
Some samples for my new friends...?
My favorite is definitely 'Afternoon Storm'...very, very good job.
I could hear it, obviously, but I could also feel it and touch it. A very good way to look at a rainy day...lol..
Reply:My fave...Afternoon Storm.. Why? I love storms and I like the picture you painted.
Reply:My favorite here is "Little Green Vine". I like its rhythm.
Reply:2 was cool.
Reply:the first one, they were all good though!
Monday, February 13, 2012
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